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I got a new map of the world. I pasted it on the wall. It's a pity! I can't find out my home on it..

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I need to take a weighing machine to school tomorrow. I need to use it in my math class..

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My classmates brought different kinds of weighing machines today. There are clectronic wieghing machines and spring weighing machines..

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I got four pictures today. They were taken by my classmate's mother. She was very kind.

[ 本帖最后由 冰城来的男孩子 于 2010-4-15 20:18 编辑 ].

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原帖由 冰城来的男孩子 于 2010-4-14 20:43 发表 \"\"
My classmates brought different kinds of weighing machines today. There are clectronic wieghing machines and spring weighing machines.
这个看了半天,终于懂了。那个叫electronic balance/scale和spring balance,呵呵。.

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原帖由 不二周助 于 2010-4-15 23:07 发表 \"\"

这个看了半天,终于懂了。那个叫electronic balance/scale和spring balance,呵呵。
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Mom and sister picked me up today. On the way home, my sister and I shared the bread bite by bite.

[ 本帖最后由 冰城来的男孩子 于 2010-4-18 19:13 编辑 ].

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Daddy and Mommy took us to the supermarket this afternoon. We bought a lot of snacks. We are very happy..

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I paid RMB 90 to my coach today. We are going to have a swimming race next month..

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I bought 3 bags stickers. They were made in China.

[ 本帖最后由 冰城来的男孩子 于 2010-4-22 19:57 编辑 ].

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I got a very bad mark in the Math exam. I missed lots of subjects.

[ 本帖最后由 冰城来的男孩子 于 2010-4-22 19:58 编辑 ].

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原帖由 冰城来的男孩子 于 2010-4-18 19:04 发表 \"\"
Mom and sister picked me up today. On the way home, my sister and I shared the bread bite by bite.
I'd tend to use "with my "Sister" some people say it's assumed, depends on whether you use "sister" and a proper name or not (as well as local custom.)

I'd leave the definite article off of "bread." The reader doesn't know about the existence of any bread yet so referring it to is a a specific thing, is qa little awkward. If the bread had been introduced to us in an earlier sentence or even earlier in the sentence (such as "Mom brought some bread for a snack. On the way home, my sister and I shared the bread, bite by bite.") that would work for me. oh, and you need a comman after "bread."

[ 本帖最后由 香格里拉的春天 于 2010-4-23 10:41 编辑 ].

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I go to school every week. My Daddy goes to school every week too. And my younger sister will go to kindergarten soon..

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I tried another OM class this morning. It's interesting. I like it. I will go there next Saturday.

[ 本帖最后由 冰城来的男孩子 于 2010-4-24 14:40 编辑 ].

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My younger sister is a good girl.
She doesn't cut flowers in the park.
She doesn't hold and bend trees in the garden.
She doesn't throw fruit skin on the road.
But sometimes she draws on the wall at home......


[ 本帖最后由 冰城来的男孩子 于 2010-4-25 20:09 编辑 ].

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I lost my new umbrella today at the swimming pool..

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Mom took my younger sister to supermarket this morning. They bought 3 picture books. One for my sister, the rest two for my nephew.
We are going to visit my granelperremts tomorrow. And we are going to Yangzhou the day after tomorrow. We will stay in Yangzhou for 3 days.
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We watched the 2010 EXPO opening ceremony fireworks show at our home yesterday evening. That's fantastic. We took many pictures of beautiful fireworks. My cousin comes my home this morning. He takes our car back his home. We are going to leave. Off we go!.

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I read two story books today. They are very funny..

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We got several silkworms from my schoolmate today. They look very lovely.

[ 本帖最后由 冰城来的男孩子 于 2010-5-5 20:55 编辑 ].

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I like eating dumplings with corns inside. My younger sister likes them too.

I like eating dumplings with corns inside. My younger sister likes them too..

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I want to be a litter guide of Finland pavilion.

[ 本帖最后由 冰城来的男孩子 于 2010-5-15 08:25 编辑 ].

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We are going to be young pioneers. We are all very happy and very expecting..

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We are going to have a swimming race tomorrow morning.

[ 本帖最后由 冰城来的男孩子 于 2010-5-29 12:50 编辑 ].

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I took part in 50 m free style and 50 m backstroke swimming race this morning. I got NO.1 in my group for both items.

[ 本帖最后由 冰城来的男孩子 于 2010-5-29 13:13 编辑 ].

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Keep on.....

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I didn't write any sentence last week..

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Hi Andy

Hi Andy,
Your are a good boy, I like you.
1 Suggestion to you,
Just speak English English, instead of Chinese English.
Feel English and Write in westen way.

Fighting and good luck.

Newman.

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回复 478#maizi 的帖子

Thank you!.

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Mum took my sister and I to EXPO site after dinner. I rode my bicycle. My sister sit in her baby stroller. We saw lots of pivilions.

[ 本帖最后由 冰城来的男孩子 于 2010-6-13 21:29 编辑 ].

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I am going to visit EXPO tomorrow. I am very exciting now..

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I watched a movie today. It's a long movie named Harry Porter and Halt-Blood Prince. I spent two and half hours on it.

[ 本帖最后由 冰城来的男孩子 于 2010-6-20 13:52 编辑 ].

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I plan to read and listen an audio English story every day from now on.

http://www.veryabc.cn/flash/html/stories/20070107/689.html time for work
http://www.veryabc.cn/flash/html/stories/20070327/1112.html woman's work.

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I went to my Mum's company with my Mum today. She showed me around the office and workshop. It was very noisy in the workshop. But it was very nice in the office.

[ 本帖最后由 冰城来的男孩子 于 2010-6-25 18:04 编辑 ].

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My chess level got upgraded to 2D finally after 7 plays today.

My chess level got upgraded to 2D finally after 7 plays today..

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原帖由 冰城来的男孩子 于 2010-6-27 20:55 发表 \"\"
My chess level got upgraded to 2D finally after 7 plays today.
Finally, After 7 matches, my chess level was upgraded to 2D today..

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Written by Winifred dated Jul. 05, 2010

My last English teacher was Jack.  He'd taught me since I was three years old.
My English teacher is Sissi now.  She's taught me me for two years.

My last pets were silkworms.  I had had them since this April.
But now my pets are three little tortoises.  I have had them for the past one week..

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I caught a cold yesterday. I had a sore throat and a heaache. I thought I was going to run a fever, but I didn't. I felt dizzy and sleepy. And I did sweat a lot..

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Mom killed three ants. They were eating our suger in our kitchen.

[ 本帖最后由 冰城来的男孩子 于 2010-7-10 16:19 编辑 ].

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My grammy is EXPO volunteer. She walks around downstairs every Thursday.

My grammy is EXPO volunteer. She walks around downstairs every Thursday.

[ 本帖最后由 冰城来的男孩子 于 2010-7-26 19:36 编辑 ].

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回复 13#冰城来客 的帖子

mum and dad are acutally more commonly used..

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回复 462#香格里拉的春天 的帖子

haha, let's go easy on the kid. he is doing just great, so is his mom. he writes in a way as how we speak on a daily basis. and most of the time, i use: me and my sister....lol. and i don't normally start  a sentence with a capital letter. let's appreciate andy and his mom's effort in learning a new language..

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Good on you! Andy...keep on going......

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Mum and I watched the movie Titanic this morning. There were only 700 survived in 2200 people after it hit the iceberg..

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