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[外语] 孩子自编的Tongue twister

孩子自编的Tongue twister

晚饭后,孩子一边听音乐一边在白板上乱涂乱画.后来我发现白板上留着的好像是他自编的Tongue twister

I’m a student of the normal school.(I’m a student  in a normal school.)
I have just graduated from a formal school.
I have to do my normal but not formal exercises.
If I’m a formal student,and you steal my normal heart,then I’ll be a normal mammal in the formal stage.

[ 本帖最后由 frank妈妈 于 2006-12-7 11:16 编辑 ].

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太厉害了!
望尘莫及啊。.

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厉害的.

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I’m a student of the normal school.
I have just graduated from a formal school.
I have to do my normal but not formal exercises.
If I’m a formal student,and you steal my normal heart,then I’ll be a normal mammal in the formal stage.

It doesn't sound like a tongue twister to me. A tongue twister is something that causes a little difficulty when you try to say it. This seems pretty easy to say; even when I say it as fast as possible.

However, it does sound a little poetic and has a nice rhythmic feel to it. All except for the very last word. It seems a little out of place because it doesn't rhyme with any of the other words. If he changed that last word, perhaps he could put some music to it..

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回复 #4 watermelon 的帖子

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飘过.

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只有感慨了,咋都这么优秀呢?.

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陪着女儿继续向哥哥姐姐们学习.

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回复 #1 frank妈妈 的帖子

好棒!!!.

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回复 #4 watermelon 的帖子

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