这是我儿子今天写的文章,请各位提些意见，帮助他进一步提高写作水平,谢谢!
        The  festivals   in    China
There are many traditional festivals in China, here are 3  of  the  most important ones.They are Sping festivals,Tomb sweeping festival and Mid-autumn festeval.

First ,I'll talk about Sping festival. It's on Jan 1st in Lunar Calander. On that day, we clean our appartment, visit freinds, play with cousins, see fire works and
watch the Spring festival gala during that time.

Second, I'll speak about Tomb sweeping festival. It's on April 5th. On that day, we go to visit our relatives which are dead. We pray for them, bless them and miss them.

And at last, I'll say about Mid Autumn festival, It's on every Aug 15th from lunar calander. We can see a bright,full, round and big moon hung on the dark blue sky.
It's beautiful. We also eat all kinds of moon cakes. They are delicious.

I think these chinese festeval are unique and intersting. I like them. How about you?.

，伤心啊！贴了两天了，都没人来指点，急啊！希望各位前辈及葫芦老师等英语老师都来帮忙看看，还需在哪方面有所改进，我也会将儿子写的小文章陆续贴上来，请各位都提宝贵意见，拜托啦！.

谢谢您的关注。题目是他爸爸参考了科普英语给他出的，让他带给自己老师看，他怕难为情，只能贴在这里请各位高手点评。而且我觉得大家看文章的角度和他老师以及家长的角度都会有所不同，会给他提供更有价值的意见，或许一篇看不出问题，以后我有空就会贴些他自己写的小文章请大家指点，谢谢！.

刚认真学习了您的点评，收获很大，的确很多地方是我们自己没注意到的，周末让孩子自己也好好学习体会一下。孩子目前是三年级，我最担心他用中文思维学英语写文章，平时基本让他选自己喜欢写的题目操练，但似乎还是摆脱不了中文思维，蛮急人的.看来只能慢慢来，小火慢笃。.

其实这正是让我胸闷的地方，孩子还在幼儿园时我就在旺旺网上学习了，所以平时还是比较注意这方面的问题的，经常给他听各种内容的英语文章。而且小东西也特别喜欢听英语故事，最近迷上了床头灯英语的MP3,每天只要有空就听故事，就象老年人听说书一样。平时他看的电影都是网上下载的原版动画片，阅读是上外的那套科普读物，就他目前的水平而言也应该够了。我总觉得输入已经很多了，为啥输出依旧比较薄弱啊！.

很高兴能看到不二周助和水老师的贴子，说实话您们都是我崇拜的偶像。一早仔细拜读了混NT的帖子让我茅塞顿开，或许是我自己的思维定势妨碍了孩子，看来多阅读多练笔是当务之急。非常感谢各位中肯的评价！.