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The festivals in China
There are many traditional festivals in China, here are 3 of the most important ones.They are Sping festivals,Tomb sweeping festival and Mid-autumn festeval.
First ,I'll talk about Sping festival. It's on Jan 1st in Lunar Calander. On that day, we clean our appartment, visit freinds, play with cousins, see fire works and
watch the Spring festival gala during that time.
Second, I'll speak about Tomb sweeping festival. It's on April 5th. On that day, we go to visit our relatives which are dead. We pray for them, bless them and miss them.
And at last, I'll say about Mid Autumn festival, It's on every Aug 15th from lunar calander. We can see a bright,full, round and big moon hung on the dark blue sky.
It's beautiful. We also eat all kinds of moon cakes. They are delicious.
I think these chinese festeval are unique and intersting. I like them. How about you?.
