1. Through the window I see pigeons flying free
ly with the beautiful melody and every moment of harmony is like a gentle breeze touching my heart.
2. To put everything in a
nutshell,
so fantastic is Singing＆Dancing Club that I’ve fallen in love with it. 后一句不该用倒装句形式。中国老师觉得这篇作文已经是近乎完美了！
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